Mrs Elizabeth Darcy

First off, real tears here. Ugh, heartbreaking tear-jerking stuff. It's a really, really sad story, and I enjoyed it. (That sounds so weird...but it's true.) I thought it was interesting ...

Awesome. The original story was pretty depressing, and I think you've done an excellent job in rewriting it. I don't know if I see anything wrong content-wise, but of course ...

Okay. Can I ask how old you were when you wrote this? It says you're sixteen. Did you write this just now? Or was it a long time ago? If ...

He is really cute... I'm not sure about the mouth. It maybe looks a little off-centre...? But his eyes are awesome, and his hair is so pretty. I also like ...

AAH! Boy angst! AAH! How many of us can relate? *raises hand* I'm a little thrown off when you change your rhyme scheme in the middle. Well, enough and much ...

I like that even without discernible meter or rhyme, this is still a poem, even if only because of the poetic language. The language is so pretty! Unseen horizons, long ...

:) Have you ever heard the Beatles's song "Hard Day's Night?" Your poem reminds me of that: finding solace with the person you love. You've also captured that sense of ...

I wrote a baby poem For no one’s good but mine The metre neatly even I tried to make it rhyme. I wrote a baby poem, And this I have ...

Sad and hopeful. Lovely

Yay! Awesome! Adorable! Third stanza: love it. I wish I could attain your level of awesomeness in the field of poetic language. Half the time I end up writing prose ...

Time is a scary thing... I don't think I've reached the age where I start worrying about getting old yet. What's the difference between youthful and young, in that first ...

:) I like. Short, simple, and this what you call blank verse? I'm not as up in poetry terms as I used to be. Oh, you want 'Blue is the ...

Tom and Becky sat alone on the stone cold cave floor, waiting for a sound besides the steady drip, drip, drip of water from the stalactites. “Tom,” said Becky, in ...

An evil king there was, in Crete Who, when the Athenians he did beat Demanded in tribute that eighteen youth Nine girls and nine boys, in truth Be given and ...

Though safety we have on the 'surest' way, We may find our greatest adventures lay Round the bend in the path, the turn in the road It may lead to ...